You've been there through it all
Wiping the tears from my eyes
Telling me it will be okay
Laying by my side until I stop crying
Waiting for me to fall asleep
Holding my hand to scare away the nerves
Sitting in the stands
Cheering me on
Smiling at me when all I can do is frown
Saying I love you every chance you get
Kissing my forehead
Checking up on me when your worried
Running this race called life
Right by my side
Encouraging me
Listening to me
Reassuring me, you'll always be there
You'll always love me
I'm so proud to call you Mom and Dad.
Wow! This is an amazing poem!! I love the way you end it with: "I'm so proud to call you Mom and Dad." I'm really jealous of what an awesome writer you are. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Lian. You're so nice. Your compliments make me feel really special:)
ReplyDeleteThis is great! It's so sweet and makes me really think about how much I love my mom and dad. We're so lucky to have great parents!
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Oh...my...gosh! This is amazing! Like Karen said, it made me think of the amazing parents we have. I love your writing too. This poem doesn't really have a pattern, but it still sounds great. Great job!
ReplyDeleteahhhhh Liv this is absoulutely amazing! I agree with everyone aboove. At times our parents may make us upset, but in the end they will always be there for us! You did a great job of putting your feelings in the poem and your voice is really apparent in this piece :) nice job!!! <3
ReplyDeleteLiv!! This is so good and so sweet! I love your voice, and the topic and everything you say is so true; our parents will always be there for us during hard times. I love this poem! Your writing is truly amazing, and this poem clearly shows your talent. :D Great job! (Do my comments make you feel special? haha just kidding)
ReplyDeleteYou better show this to your parents! Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr J. I already did and my mom loved it. I just felt like after all my parents have done for me I have to thank them. And writing seems to be the best way I really express my feelings. :)
ReplyDeleteWOW!! Olivia this is an amazing poem! LIke other comments said above it really made me think how great my parents are!! I also like your dream wedding dress! It's very pretty!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is precious :D That's the first word that I thought of when I finished reading it! This poem is excellent and it's good that it made me think at the end of it. Some things when you read them you just forget about it but this really had an impact on me. Great job Liv!!
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